# 9

Today we did a group activity were we read our essays or emails whatever you want to call it, we read it to the group we were in and we had to do it out loud so our members could hear it and maybe help us out with it. I think that was a great idea because like that we know how our email sounds to other people and by that i mean like we think our email may sound excellent but to other people it may sound completely different they may think its good but stuff may be missing or things may not seem right. Its not only good for them to hear mine its also good for me to hear my peers email as well because they may have something different that you may like and you would like to put in your email as well. What this activity does is for you to listen to opinions and take them because they say them for a reason. We not only had to read them to our peers or our group but we HAD to go to the writing center and i capitalized had because that is how important it was. Well we had to go to the writing center so the people from their would hear it and give us advice on it and add some stuff to it. My experience there was good because they changed some things but it was still me writing, like they did not made my paper seem like if i was a great writer, they just make your paper sound way better and that is a really good help because that takes a lot of stress off. So next time i have a paper to do i know exactly where to go!